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Open Poetry #43

As Eyes Sees

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2008-12-06 07:19 PM

As Eyes Sees

This is our life
Our eyes to see
So much to see
When love is here
To see the world
The world of love
Wonder of love
Let our eyes see
through our hearts
Our eyes can hide
Our time is our side
As love sees
Inside of our eyes
As eyes see the truth
As eyes sees everything
As eyes sees

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2008-12-06 07:28 PM

Enjoyed...James

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-12-06 08:11 PM

Yo Vandana,

The idea behind this is good.

I'd make that "As eyes see".

Love Bobby

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

3 posted 2008-12-06 08:33 PM

It is amazing what the eyes can see Vandana
if we really take time to look intently, but there are a lot of people who cannot see the forest for the trees. enjoyed.

Lindsay

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2008-12-07 03:58 PM

A gentle romantic write, Vandana.

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