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Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2008-12-05 03:26 PM


Just like that old movie
"The postman Always Rings Twice."
Today, the law of karma
has finally thrown the dice.
For a murderer, most foul,
has laughed in the face of justice
for as long as providence will allow.
His piper has played a sweet tune.
Time to pay the piper now.

                      Ida

[This message has been edited by Marchmadness (12-05-2008 05:28 PM).]

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2008-12-05 03:31 PM


Justice prevail! ~ Finally!

Cleverly written.

Love to you, dear Ida!

Linda

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-12-05 04:44 PM


oh, that it would always be true...perhaps, I'm just too skeptical...I love the thought behind your write, though
WTBAKELAR
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3 posted 2008-12-05 04:49 PM


Many may not know of the prison system in Nevada, but they are all in the bleakest of desserts, in the middle of nowhere. It gets up to 115* in the summers and cold in the winters.

Nothing like So Cal or Florida.

It's Karma alright,
What goes around, comes around,  
or how about this one,
He who does the devils work, will pay in Hell.  
Welcome to the Nevada prison and retirement home.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
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So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2008-12-05 05:02 PM


I know about the Nevada prison system. There's a prison up on a hill behind one of the casinos on the way into Vegas that gave me the chills every time we passed it.
                                       Ida

Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA
5 posted 2008-12-05 07:52 PM


Yes, I will agree. It is time to pay the piper.
secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2008-12-05 07:57 PM


His escaping that murder charge was simply a quintessential example of the
real 'operative principle' behind the contemporary criminal (IN)justice system:

"Guilty until proven rich!" ...

[He may yet escape this latest circumstance via protracted appeal(s), of course]

fine write!!

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
7 posted 2008-12-05 08:09 PM



Yes dear Ida, we all have to pay the piper at the finish, cleverly written, Love

Lindsay

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
8 posted 2008-12-05 08:47 PM


Yo dear Ida,

I don't like to see anyone go to prison.

I'm still waiting for that day when a pill is invented that will turn a bad person good.

One of my beloved cousins went to prison, and was infected with Hepatitis ā€œCā€.  He died from it a short time after his release.

Bobby

serenity blaze
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9 posted 2008-12-05 08:54 PM


*smiling so wide it Hertz*


Midnitesun
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10 posted 2008-12-06 12:58 PM


Ah, chuckling here at Ms Serenity's reply.

I feel sorry for the children, for all they've suffered.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
11 posted 2008-12-06 05:25 AM


Hi Ida, I had always serious doubts about this guy, cats don't do dogs in french.

regards

yann

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
12 posted 2008-12-06 05:37 AM


I have not followed much this case, but I see your point, dear Ida, and you always succeed in bringing across a clever message.

Some say that when we die we shall experience everything we have done to others and therefore suffer the pains we may have inflicted. That lesson would be probably more useful when still alive ... so that we could mend.

Love,
Margherita

amusemi
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13 posted 2008-12-07 01:52 AM


Great write!
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