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ghowton
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0 posted 2008-12-04 11:50 PM


I approched a women; ripped open my chest
"I give you" I said,"the greatest gift of all, my heart. Take it ad cherish it,show it,show everyone what I have shown you. For my heart is me.
"Why do you give me your heart" she said. I have no need for it, it has no use for me.



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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-12-05 07:18 AM


Welcome to Pip!

... a woman wasn't probably the woman!

Dein Herz weiss wo es willkommen ist!

Unrequited love is painful, but we still can love unconditionally ...

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2008-12-05 09:55 AM


Welcome!

some will some won't...there are too many to count but I'd be careful ripping open your shirt at women you don't know!

steavenr
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3 posted 2008-12-05 03:45 PM


ouch!  cold in any language still feels cold...welcome to PiP
Marchmadness
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4 posted 2008-12-05 05:54 PM


Welcome to PIP, ghowton. I would say "button your shirt and keep your heart." YOU do have need of it.
                                 Ida

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
5 posted 2008-12-06 09:44 AM


welcome to pip
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2008-12-06 07:27 PM


Nice writing...a mutual want is important when it comes to hearts of desire...James
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