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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-12-04 08:35 AM



it seems like only yesterday
I wrote you a poem and you smiled
I guess it surprised you that I would
and would even tell you about it too

and now today you look in here again
just to see what I am up to
yes, I was thinking of you dancing
perhaps with an occasional stranger

and letting your hair down easy
so it is hard to not want to
and smiling that way you do
when you don't know what comes next

but you glance into the morning windows
to see if you see yourself there
and if you are wearing a smiled sigh
and something ladylike over your shoulders

like maybe just a ribbon of my words


______________

daark



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1 posted 2008-12-04 09:14 AM


*SIGHS*

mmmmmmmmmmmmmm

this is so yummy!

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-12-04 10:39 AM


quote:
but you glance into the morning windows
to see if you see yourself there
and if you are wearing a smiled sigh
and something ladylike over your shoulders

like maybe just a ribbon of my words




Delightful, dear D.!

Love,
Margherita

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
3 posted 2008-12-04 11:48 AM


Hey!  Is she naked?


Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-12-04 12:54 PM


ms suesea, thanks babe

___________

ms mar, thank you lady friend for your warm touch

_____________

ms ali-san..only her smile is..thanks babe

Alison
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5 posted 2008-12-08 01:41 AM


You know, she better be careful where she rides her horse - her chocolate bits could freeze off.

[And this safety message was brought to you by Godiva Lovers around the World.]

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2008-12-08 05:16 AM


laughing at Ali-girl's last response!!

mmm...yes, I think all the ladies would be thinking you might have penned this for them Mr Daark... 'sigh' ... lovely gifting..

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2008-12-08 06:15 AM


ms ali-san..um..the word you said.."freeze" what does that mean?  Here at the beach no one seems to know?


________________

ms r&b, you mind always goes to something edible doesn't it...thanks babe

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
8 posted 2008-12-08 07:33 AM


Okay, she could melt and people would think she was just one more California oil slick, Slick.

(grins)

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