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Open Poetry #43

Snowflakes

shortsleeves
Member

since 2008-10-19

Posts 125
Franklin Tennessee

0 posted 2008-12-03 05:13 PM

The Sound
Of A Snowflake
Echoes
Through Time
As It Finds
A Place
Of Peace

Frozen Shapes
Of Geometry
Transport Water
In Majestic Beauty
Filling Space
With Artistic Flair

The Simple Water Drop
Becomes
The Maestro
Of A Diverse Orchestra
Covering Life
With The Blanket
Of Energy
It Then Disappears
In A Bed
Of Mystery

Forever Present
In Conscious Thought
The Voice
Of A Snowflake
Whispers My Name

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-12-03 05:42 PM

I simply adore this poem. Every single phrase is filled with enchantment.

In absence of direct experience recently, I close my eyes and place myself into the scene ... your poem makes it easy. Wonder filled!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

shortsleeves
Member

since 2008-10-19

Posts 125
Franklin Tennessee

2 posted 2008-12-03 07:04 PM

Thank you Margherita. The snow is beautiful.
Love,
Hal

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2008-12-04 01:20 PM

Beautiful, shortsleeves. I can almost feel the snowflakes on my face.
Ida

shortsleeves
Member

since 2008-10-19

Posts 125
Franklin Tennessee

4 posted 2008-12-04 01:51 PM

Thank Ida. I appreciate your comment.
Hal

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2012-09-02 05:55 AM

I was diving and found this magical poem and enjoyed it once again. Dear Hal, it would be a precious gift if you would come back here sharing some of your fantastic poems!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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