Open Poetry #43 |
Soaring eagle |
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"Schmetterling" by Pablo Picasso * * * I saw you soaring like an eagle in wondrous heights. I called out your name. In midst of dancing echoes you touched ground upon my breast with the lightness and grace of a butterfly and shared my breath. * * * |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
How lovely, Margherita, but, of course, it's what we've come to expect from our lovely Margherita. Helen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - a delightful read, liked this one... BC |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
you combine the majesty of the eagle with the masterpiece of the butterfly...exquisite |
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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
The lightness of unity is a dancing echo that never ends. Beautiful Margherita. Love, Hal |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely Margherita...James |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Margherita, Your poem and "Schmetterling" go well together. Love Bobby |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Beautiful writing, my beautiful friend. Love, Alison |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is a delight, Margharita. Ida |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
My Dear Margherita i admire your all poems it's really wonderful. thank you it's very nice words God bless you love nourzihane |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Through the air we breathe, yes we are connected , and that is sometimes salvation and love right there in itself. You write words of wonder |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
This is such a beautifully written sentiment. Delicate, powerful, sensual, captivating. Put this in your "Best of the Best" file. Love it, Merry Christmas Margherita. WT. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Margherita, what everybody said, especially Steaven! This is most decidedly one of your very best and that is saying A LOTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!! - Owl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Maybe it's me but I found in this one, a very passionate kiss and some of the special moments just before that kiss. Hmmmm .... I will have to go back and read again as my mind might be stuck on something else. LOL Enjoyed immensly and especially loved the ties to nature and passion. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
How do you do it time after time! You're amazing ~ in spirit and in talent! I love your writing! ~ and you! Your poetry makes me smile within and without. Fly high and free my little butterfly! You are of the utmost beauty and grace. Linda Angelo Terrestre |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Margherita, it is one of you best to my opinion, It is incredibly deep and beautiful, the duality between high and low, the human condition, it tells a lot to me....Great work...I add it to my library. yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much. The kindness of your replies, my dear Poet friends, made me spread my wings .... Love, Margherita |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Very beautiful! You sure have a way with words. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Margherita, this was a wonderful read my friend, really enjoyed. Rick |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
I agree with all the above responses dear Margherita, you certainly do have a way with words and I too think it is one of your best. Top applause my dear. Love Lindsay |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, dear Sue, Rick and Lindsay, for your kind and generous replies. You brought smiles. Love, Margherita |
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