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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2008-07-19 06:48 AM

* * *

The answer from Universe

* * *

A tune of unfathomable longing
drummed upon the steering wheel,
eyes routinely focused on traffic,
while the windows of my mind
open wide to scrutinize my life.
Whispers between heart and soul
manifest a long-cherished thought,
a secret desire uttered in unison.

From its many friendly faces
the night smiles knowingly at me.
I see my wish shield hanging
high up there among the stars.
The moon too is waving hello.
I know that Universe conspires,
all available data is glanced through
to realize my innermost desire.

Darkness shows me through its empire,
undaunted I relax in its quiet embrace,
my dreams bring crystalline waters
eager to caress my every component
to celebrate rebirth and innocence,
till I feel dawn dancing upon my face.
An inner tremor expands from my core,
a new awareness unfolds in splendour.
In fervid anticipation I adorn my soul,
so that you will perceive it in full bloom,
when the moment comes to welcome you.

You, who have listened to my prayer,
You, who now share my every breath,
You, who dance to the same divine tune,
You, who know the hidden side of the moon
You, whose energy revives my own
You, who do not fear sporadic shadows
You, who contemplate and glorify life
in every way.
You, who are the answer from Universe,
know that I welcome you anew
in gratitude and full consciousness,
in every single moment
of every new day.
* * *

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2008-07-19 10:43 AM

Your poem conveys so much... The freedom to simply be and embrace
all the goodness that surrounds us makes me want to get up and dance.

This is lovely, Margherita~

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2008-07-19 01:11 PM

Dear Margherita, you write from a place that not many go to and that's why your words are always so beautiful and meaningful. Thank you!

Love
Helen

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

3 posted 2008-07-19 01:22 PM

Hi Margherita, wonderful write… thank you for taking us through this answer from the universe. Enjoyed the journey. Prasad

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2008-07-19 01:26 PM

Margherita, I was saving this poem to read last. I knew that it would be spiritually captivating and engaging and that I would be hard pressed to pull myself out of the reverie and be able to respond to the poetry of others.
Your poetry always sweeps me away to other worlds and it takes me a while to return to terra ferma.

Another

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2008-07-19 02:08 PM

Hi Margherita, this is beautiful and a vibrant hommage to the universe and his creator...

You, who have listened to my prayer,
You, who now share my every breath,
You, who dance to the same divine tune,
You, who know the hidden side of the moon
You, whose energy revives my own
You, who do not fear sporadic shadows
You, who contemplate and glorify life
in every way.
You, who are the answer from Universe,
know that I welcome you anew
in gratitude and full consciousness,
in every single moment
of every new day.
this stanza is outstanding

regards

yann

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2008-07-19 02:12 PM

I echo Yann's words, Margherita.

I lost myself in your skies, for a wonderful while.

- Owl

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2008-07-19 03:42 PM

Amen.

Love,
Eric

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

8 posted 2008-07-19 09:04 PM

Margherita-

In fervid anticipation I adorn my soul,
so that you will perceive it in full bloom,
when the moment comes to welcome you.

How joyous and sensual a greeting to receive..
open heart, open arms, in complete connection with the Universe. *sigh* Lovely.

Indigo

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

9 posted 2008-07-19 09:20 PM

Yo Margherita,

This is an interesting poem, with its "wish shield".

Love bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

10 posted 2008-07-20 04:19 AM

Dear Margherita... a wonderful, wonderful gifting you gift us..... love RDB x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2008-07-20 08:05 AM

Thank you all, my dear Poet friends, for being patient enough to read this long write and for your loving comments that touched my heart.

Love and have a wonderful Sunday!

Margherita

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

12 posted 2008-07-21 01:17 AM

Only someone with a beautiful soul and a deep understanding could write this, Margharita. I am keeping this one.
Ida

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

13 posted 2008-07-21 10:59 AM

Just Beautiful!

I love the word choice and Descriptions you chose to use!

I love anything to do with Stars...

ARCTIC WIND

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2008-07-21 12:05 PM

very nice

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

15 posted 2008-07-21 09:07 PM

A wonderful post Margherita my dear

It touches the heart strings. love

Lindsay

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

16 posted 2008-07-22 04:23 PM

I like your use of language in this one, and the images to conjure up.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

17 posted 2008-07-22 08:51 PM

Margherita!

I am coming in for another read!

LOVELY!

ARCTIC WIND

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

18 posted 2008-07-22 09:27 PM

(quote)I see my wish shield hanging
high up there among the stars.(/quote)
I wish I had written this...

Send me your muse's sister, please!

Mine has gone to other realms!

And thank you...for everything!

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

19 posted 2008-07-22 10:15 PM

Simply wonderful!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

20 posted 2008-07-23 11:49 AM

You are all so kind and warm my heart with your loving comments! Thank you!

Love,
Margherita

snoman
New Member

since 2008-12-03

Posts 7

21 posted 2008-12-03 06:58 PM

Margherita, I am new to this site, but I enjoyed your thoughts very much.

nourzihane
Member

since 2008-07-10

Posts 254
Algeria

22 posted 2008-12-04 04:07 AM

You, who have listened to my prayer,
You, who now share my every breath,
You, who dance to the same divine tune,
You, who know the hidden side of the moon
You, whose energy revives my own
You, who do not fear sporadic shadows
You, who contemplate and glorify life
in every way.
You, who are the answer from Universe,
know that I welcome you anew
in gratitude and full consciousness,
in every single moment
of every new day.

*********************
the creativity is you .. the beauty is you too.
thank you margherita for your nice pom

My respect
nourzihane

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

23 posted 2008-12-04 07:09 AM

Dear Margherita, you were in a different world here my friend, I loved it all, thank you for sharing.

Rick

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

24 posted 2008-12-04 01:22 PM

Thank you, dear snoman, for your loving comment and welcome to Pip! I will be looking forward to your entries.

Thank you, dear Nourzihane! You always touch me with your sweet replies.

Thank you, dear Rick, my dear gentleman for your loving comment.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

25 posted 2008-12-04 04:39 PM

I agree with Sunshine about the wish shield... what a wonderful image! *S*

I'm glad I didn't miss this! *S*

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

26 posted 2008-12-05 04:50 PM

Dear Margherita you can turn the most hardhearted into a believer

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

27 posted 2008-12-05 04:58 PM

Margherita, I know you are always there to read my poems and I thank you for your allways kind and heartfelt replies.
I am so glad to read you and enjoy the thoughts you provoke. What a deep and inspirational write.

Absolutely lovely.

As you can see, we all love to read you and admire your skills and sweet spirit.

Thank you again. Love WT.

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

28 posted 2008-12-05 04:59 PM

"You, who are the answer from Universe,
know that I welcome you anew
in gratitude and full consciousness,
in every single moment
of every new day."

...lovely ending to a very lovely poem...enjoyed

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

29 posted 2008-12-06 11:37 PM

An absolute pleasure to read...James

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

30 posted 2008-12-07 04:06 AM

Thank you, dear Suthern, Michele, Tracey, Steaven and James, for your loving and kind replies.

Enjoy a love filled, sunny Sunday, and let Universe collaborate in the realization of your dreams!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

31 posted 2008-12-07 08:23 AM

Margherita, you can sure write. This is fantastic. Just beautiful. Thank you for sharing your universe with me.

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

32 posted 2008-12-07 03:28 PM

fine 'Universalistic' photographic and poetic imagery!

applause!!

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

33 posted 2008-12-07 03:29 PM

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

34 posted 2008-12-10 05:19 PM

Thank you, dear Sue and dear Bruce, for your loving comments!
Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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