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Open Poetry #43

Whatever you want it to be...

Triskaidekaphobia
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

0 posted 2008-12-03 12:23 PM

Whatever you want it to be...

The wind won't weep to selfless fray
that feeling (almost empty anyway)
Of close despair near everyday.
A sophist angst near ridden dead
will not reflect (on any day)
what your breath will try to say
to you or me... or this... or that.

Just damn it all.
And arm yourself with vapid trysts
Cold emptiness.
These pointless lists.
Are torniquets of silent bliss
That steal the heart
In a single softened kiss

So now armed you are
Against the lies you tell yourself
As if to say "I fought and won."
Yet any fool can tell you this
"No One Is Fooled One Bit.
Not Even You, You Prick."

Yet at least
The wind won't weep
As if to wish you dead.
That you'll have to do yourself, my friend
Since Nature isn't rich.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2008-12-05 07:49 PM

"Yet at least
The wind won't weep
As if to wish you dead."
The dark side of your spirit shining through, eh?

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-12-05 08:43 PM

I found some very cool word combos among the rest, in particular, the following:

"sophist angst, vapid trysts, torniquets of silent bliss,"

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2008-12-06 06:17 PM

Well done.
Smooth delivery

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2008-12-06 07:15 PM

enjoyed

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

5 posted 2008-12-07 01:33 AM

have missed your writing my sweet friend...this is awesome

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