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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. It’s quiet here The good old man Has just come up Over the leafless trees Somewhere Out there I can feel you still Calling my name More than times Have changed And things are not As once they were A closed door In warm rooms Beyond the picture Window December And the snow Slowly falling . |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nicely portrayed setting. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
another moment in time as life moves forward with the past leaving small portions in us. Loved this and will probably read a few more times to soak it all in. |
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