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Open Poetry #43
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Bladecatcher
Junior Member
since 2008-11-25
Posts 15
0 posted 2008-11-30 11:50 PM

Explosive ignition
Immolation rolling across my skin
Viciously licking anemic air
Blood and thunder rise behind my eyes
Demons leaping
Unbidened
From my combusting chest
Tounge lashing
A whip emprisoned (or liberated?) in flames

Even as I become the Burning Man
I know I'll regret it later

Am I such a child?
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2008-12-01 06:09 AM

wow!! that left an impact! well done... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2008-12-01 10:04 AM

Yo Bladecatcher,

Don't burn baby, don't.

I got a kick out of this one.

Bobby
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