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FNG
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0 posted 2008-11-30 12:47 PM


When I'm stuffed,
both inside and out.
Literally nothing flows...
except the breath in my mouth.

Letters can't reveal the depth of my soul.
26 of them, in any combination.
Had God had a mouth,
what would he say to console?
for those in pit holes...

There are so many emotions,
created by God.
With complexities words cant't plot.

The inners of me raved for an outlet,
to tell my feeligns in minutes,
in my mental meetings.

But God tamed them,
Suddenly, the thirst to be understood vanised.
When God had my inner peace tower varnised.

No words can reach the depth where only God's hand could go...

Be bold and let things unfold...
Even it was untold by words we know.

In combinations that can't reach the goal,
of telling how I feel as my blue days roll.

© Copyright 2008 Danielle Tan - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-11-30 02:30 PM


quote:
Be bold and let things unfold...



That is good advice. We can always try and try again, even if the outcome is not always corresponding to our expectations.

Well done.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2008-11-30 02:43 PM


"Be bold and let things unfold..."

I like how you phrased that. ~ Sort of a "Let go and let God", philosophy!

I'm going with the flow, as well!

~ May your blues roll into sunny yellows.

EA

FNG
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3 posted 2008-11-30 10:48 PM


Thanks for reading and understanding....
steavenr
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4 posted 2008-11-30 11:55 PM


"No words can reach the depth where only God's hand could go"

what a beautiful, insightful and deeply rich phrase...nice write

FNG
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5 posted 2008-12-06 12:42 PM


thanks steavner,

making such a nice comment on my poem...

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