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When words can't express
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When words can't express |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
When I'm stuffed, both inside and out. Literally nothing flows... except the breath in my mouth. Letters can't reveal the depth of my soul. 26 of them, in any combination. Had God had a mouth, what would he say to console? for those in pit holes... There are so many emotions, created by God. With complexities words cant't plot. The inners of me raved for an outlet, to tell my feeligns in minutes, in my mental meetings. But God tamed them, Suddenly, the thirst to be understood vanised. When God had my inner peace tower varnised. No words can reach the depth where only God's hand could go... Be bold and let things unfold... Even it was untold by words we know. In combinations that can't reach the goal, of telling how I feel as my blue days roll. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: That is good advice. We can always try and try again, even if the outcome is not always corresponding to our expectations. Well done. Love, Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Be bold and let things unfold..." I like how you phrased that. ~ Sort of a "Let go and let God", philosophy! I'm going with the flow, as well! ~ May your blues roll into sunny yellows. EA  |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Thanks for reading and understanding.... |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"No words can reach the depth where only God's hand could go" what a beautiful, insightful and deeply rich phrase...nice write |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
thanks steavner, making such a nice comment on my poem... |
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