Open Poetry #43 |
Bottled Water |
Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Bottled Water When I have nothing Will then I still be The product of your hard labor and love I know rejection and who I am When I fail my hands are mine -Juju |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Juli, Don't drink bottled water anywhere. It'll mess up your immune system. love Bobby |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Bottled water is the most ingenius money makin' scheme ever.. 10000000% profit.... I likez yer poemz. Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Juju, this is beautifully profound. I love also your new picture, even though I detect a certain melancholy in your eyes. Enjoy your Sunday. Love, Margherita |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Awwww! There is such sadness in your poem. I sure know how it feels to be rejected. It is indeed an awful feeling to have. I hope it gets better for you. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
interesting write...this lovely gem deserves to go back up to the top |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you, every one Juju |
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