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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams

0 posted 2008-11-29 08:31 PM


Bottled Water

When I have nothing
Will then I still be
The product of your
hard labor and love

I know rejection
and who I am
When I fail
my hands
are mine


-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

© Copyright 2008 Juju - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2008-11-29 08:55 PM


Enjoyed...James
Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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2 posted 2008-11-29 09:37 PM


Yo dear Juli,

Don't drink bottled water anywhere.  It'll mess up your immune system.

love Bobby

viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
3 posted 2008-11-29 10:50 PM


Bottled water is the most ingenius money makin' scheme ever.. 10000000% profit....


I likez yer poemz.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
4 posted 2008-11-30 09:36 AM


Dear Juju, this is beautifully profound. I love also your new picture, even though I detect a certain melancholy in your eyes.

Enjoy your Sunday.
Love,
Margherita

Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28
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Oklahoma USA
5 posted 2008-11-30 10:31 AM


Awwww! There is such sadness in your poem. I sure know how it feels to be rejected. It is indeed an awful feeling to have. I hope it gets better for you.
steavenr
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6 posted 2008-11-30 11:58 PM


interesting write...this lovely gem deserves to go back up to the top
Juju
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7 posted 2008-12-02 12:32 PM


Thank you, every one

Juju

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