Open Poetry #43 |
Bones Smells People |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Bones is very, very, hungry. His belly-button is rubbing up against his backbone. It’s one of his acute hunger spells, brought on by no food for a number of days. Everyone he now sees on the street looks fat to him. He imagines their bellies hanging out over their belt buckles. The people even smell like food to him. Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Bobby, makes me think to t(he gold rush from Charlie Chaplin...Enjoyed the read. yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, I'm pleased you enjoyed the read. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Hunger is one of the worst states to be in, no doubt, dear Bobby. And it can alter the perception of things. Poor Bones and poor children in the world who still are hungry! You made me think now of the Hunger site, with a click every day we can contribute, even if only a little. Love, Margherita |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hunger is a serious issue and Bones has brought it to my mind today. And Bobby? I can't help but think of "Sweeney Todd". xoxoxo Alison |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, For your information on the "Hunger Site". Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Alison, Sweeney Todd was a good man, doing well by doing good. Thanks for the reminder. Love Bobby |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
O: Sweeny Todd huh? -Juju |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Juju, for reading and commenting. Love bobby |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Bobby I think you better let him take a bite out of one of those well fed fat people that he sees on the street, we can't have him going hungry. smiles. Lindsay |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
gosh my dear friend Bones sure has to endure alot in his life Bobby... I would give him something to eat any day, I sure do have a soft spot for him.. love RDB PS: and I do believe this is my 5000th post!!! who better to share it with than you and Bones, I am most happy about this! xxx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks LindsayP, For your concern. I'm afraid Bones doesn't do that kind of work. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear RDB, I'm certain that you would help Bones with his problems. You're a nice lady. Love Bobby |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Sometimes I feel the same way... Good write. Bones' never does me wrong. Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Paul, I'm pleased the poem worked for you. So you know that feeling too. Bobby |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Robert I don't know who bones is but I like the imagination evoked in this piece. Nice work!! Eric |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I agree with Bones, Hungry is not a good place to be. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Eric, I'm happy you enjoy the stories. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, No, hungry is not a good place to be. I've taken the tour, and didn't enjoy the trip. Hunger is a frightening place. Bobby |
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