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My Autumn flowers
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My Autumn flowers |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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They were my Autumn flowers one sang of pink in hazel vision the other's brown, his spirit solid they crowned my field before the Spring womb froze I knit them close within my breasts wrapped in wools maternal pattern and vowed protection, everlasting to my flowers delivered dawns before the winds blew home. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (11-28-2008 09:28 PM).] |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like this poem. Juju -Juju |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I have never had the knack and feel as though I am missing something vital when I read about them in your words. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are a delight to read, dear Michele. Yesterday I ordered your book at amazon and I know I will deeply enjoy your poetry. Love, Margherita  |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. This is very good. 'nough said . . . John .' |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Children are like that, aren't they? Happy Thanksgiving Mich. Enjoyed your sparkling words here. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"they crowned my field before the Spring womb froze" I love the descriptiveness of this phrase...so cool...so wishing my mind could work like this...admiring |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I can feel your love for them. It is moving, inspiring, deep. So well penned. This is beautiful, as are you. ~alyssa Hupomeno. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Thank you all for stopping by and Happy Thanksgiving to you |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Michele - at times when I read your poetry I'm at a lost what to write for a reply. This is one of those times. Excellent... Happy Thanksgiving, BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have always admired your ability to express your emotions through Nature.  I enjoyed reading your book of poetry!!! Love & Natural Light  Linda |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
A flowery poem. Wonderful. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Your poems bring visuals along with emotions and to me, that is admirable. Lovely work again. |
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