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Moon Shines |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Moon Shines Tonight The love of love For the first time love stays You know You bring love tonight Where moon shines Under the moonlight We shared here Near the ocean We watch the night falling to the ocean And yet moon still shines Where my surrenders for you your love Moon shines here at the ocean The depth of your love Whisper calling to the ocean Seeing the sky you and I are here Tonight Moon still shines Here at the ocean path you and me And this love Still moon shines moonshines..... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh, what a lovely night that was for both of you! Thank you for sharing, Vandana. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear Vandana, This is a good use of the natural world, of Moon Shine, and Love. Bobby |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
I hear music when I read this. Ah to be 'in love' - a lyric to be shared. humming wistfully... Lynda |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: Vandana, may your moon shine brightly even when the clouds obscure!  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Seeing the sky you and I are here Tonight Moon still shines Here at the ocean path you and me And this love Still moon shines moon shines..... A very romantic moment, dear Vandana, and you rendered it lovingly. Love, Margherita |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Yes a romantic post Vandana enjoyed. Lindsay |
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