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jody5
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0 posted 2008-11-24 11:40 AM



The morning dew is on the grass
Moisture fill’s the air.
View of tree’s surrounding a golf course
Incites a peaceful serenity in my soul
A dog barks in the distance
While birds twitter along
Making a chorus delightful to my ears.
I’m grateful to be alive today.


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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
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1 posted 2008-11-24 02:15 PM


gratitude is sculpted best when its materials are made of common things...nicely done, helping to remind the reader of the truly special things in life...I really like your take on this...nicely done
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2008-11-24 06:20 PM


Wonderfully expressed gratitude.

Love,
Margherita  

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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3 posted 2008-11-24 08:22 PM


jody5 - on a day such as you write about, it's very nice to be alive... Great write...

BC

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