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Drifting Apart
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Even though she has his soul and love She has no trust of him to think of, A serious wedge between their relationship Her love for him is preparing to slip Damaged at best, she’s not sure what to do Everything that used to be is suddenly untrue She wishes he could see the way she loves him; He only guesses on a random whim She is finding herself on this journey He is losing her love with certain guarantee They will drift away from one another But inside they will always love each other. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Love without trust is bound to wither ... True love is unconditional. We can't possess each other's soul, but we can be aware of being one. Your last line suggests there is hope to mend. Melancholic reflections, well rendered. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
Wow i love this poem, keep up the good work, your poems are amazing! "Life is too confusing, but I like it that way!" |
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