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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Unstructured Caught between those dissolving lines where times have changed and unseen words map the day where chance or fate can corner the mind and from a broken promise can walk away... from shattered dreams only fairy-tale real, from aches and pains that penetrate feel from kisses of faith and fleeting bliss, answers unknown from a world in the "miss" Caught between those dissolving lines, a twisted path, unstructured, confines. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Great write, excellent lines, thanx M. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Barry Great to see you on here  M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Dear Maureen, this is an exceptional write! And I do so know what you convey here. Love, Margherita  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you, Margherita dear. I am just trying to keep in touch with my poetic side since I am just "plain tired" right now  This isn't my best time of the year besides catching those germs from those 5 year olds. and thanksM |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Maureen - each of your writes say so much, and they are done exceptionally well... BC |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
As always, Bill, I thank you (for being you M |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear M, The perception that times are changing has been around for ages. In actuality, things change very slowly. Not so a person would notice them changing. Love Bobby |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Believe me Bobby, I have noticed the change~~ M |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I notice the change too, Maureen, and enjoyed your words.By the way, When I worked at school I always had a cold at this time of year. Ida |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
nicely written...well crafted not only in form but content as well...enjoyed |
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