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Open Poetry #43
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2008-11-22 11:27 AM

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November morning
A white mist rising
From a frigid solitude
A small bird calls

At one time
She must have been
Beautiful

Autumn leaves
Dried and brown
Skittering
Across the road


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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
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1 posted 2008-11-22 03:14 PM

you never cease to make the reader think...enjoyed, again...and never disappointed...
jody5
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2 posted 2008-11-22 06:38 PM

Nice Write.
Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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3 posted 2008-11-22 07:30 PM

Especially loved the middle one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)
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