Open Poetry #43 |
Defined |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Softly, And now Against Me - Your whispered breath Defines our distance. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is a classic. Just enough to define the moment, and then leave it there to be breathed in. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Tony123 Junior Member
since 2008-11-20
Posts 10 |
Short and to the point |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now this says in just a few short words, a thousand words. I read in it passion, trust, soul bonding and much much more. I enjoyed being able to just let it take me there "softly". Very much enjoyed. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
nice...very nice...a feeling of just, "ahhh" and awe |
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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
Very nice Eric. Thank you. Hal |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed as always, Eric. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... distance shrinks to nothing and oneness blooms ... Beautiful, dear Eric! Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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