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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-11-13 06:27 AM



those afternoons when you say you are tired
but your mind is racing
and would I mind messing you up
in your way of thinking

just to undress the dreams you have
and let them run around nude
by the windows over the street
for just a few hours or longer

and did anyone ever get stuck there
staying on that side of real time
would it go on forever if they did
or would it eventually just detour

and become a tired afternoon again
with your mind racing faster
looking for a doorway that was open
where you could just walk through slowly

and I would be waiting to kiss your eyes


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-11-13 06:30 AM


and I would be waiting to kiss your eyes


ah yes, Mr Daark.. I think I would like that too!   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-11-13 07:33 AM


Thanks ms r/b.
Sunshine
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3 posted 2008-11-13 09:24 AM


I've known a detour or two...



liking this one...like I like them all.




Margherita
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4 posted 2008-11-13 09:30 AM


Pure delight, dear Poet D.! Makes me want to hop along the corridor ...

caramel phonebooks

To kiss eyes is magic.

Love,
Margherita

Indigo
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5 posted 2008-11-13 05:19 PM


a mind reader you are
an open page book am i
on warm afternoons.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-11-14 06:50 AM


ms sun...you warm me with your smile


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ms mar, thanks lady friend for your eyes


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ms indi...I knew you would be there....so I waited, thanks babe

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7 posted 2008-11-14 11:46 AM


makes me want a long nap.....and something about curling up in a lap...hmmmm
I bet you could make the most frantic of minds melt into stillness

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2008-11-14 04:01 PM


ms suesea...I would do my best to sooth a place in your thoughts...thanks babe
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9 posted 2008-11-15 06:12 AM


now this I would love~~  always love the tenderside of you


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Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2008-11-15 06:32 AM


ms MMs...and I the tender side of you also....thanks babe
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11 posted 2008-11-20 01:37 AM


You write this so well.  i smile as you leave me thinking.

A

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2008-11-20 06:42 AM


thank you ali-san
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13 posted 2008-11-20 02:34 PM


long as you'd be waiting
ill keep on coming

Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2008-11-20 02:46 PM


ms inky...ditto babe  thanks
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15 posted 2008-11-20 09:47 PM


I always adore your poems. And thank you for posting on mine.
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16 posted 2008-11-20 10:06 PM


a lovely ending to a thought-provoking write...always a challenge to uncover meaning...always intriguing to try
Dark Stranger
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17 posted 2008-11-21 06:35 AM


GC..thanks ms

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steavenR...thanks guy..

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