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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2008-11-18 12:27 PM

When Sun Doesn't Come Out

What are you going to do?
Today
You thought
The sun will stay up
Until evening
But it seems like
The sun is not shining anymore
When the sun doesn't want to shine
Don't run away
Stay here
Life is sweet
You know
Today
The clouds are here to stay
So what are you going to do?
When the sun doesn't want to come out
Will you be sitting here with me?
Will you stay at home
When the sun doesn't come out
These dreams we had to make
These dreams we had to take
What are you going to do?
Are you going wait for rain to stop
When the sun doesn't come out

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-11-18 12:43 PM

quote:
When the sun doesn't want to come out
Will you be sitting here with me?

There is such beautiful yearning in this write, dear vandana!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

2 posted 2008-11-18 12:57 PM

Honest questions of devotion seeking acknowledgement. You phrase it well. Much enjoyed.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-11-18 01:07 PM

Yo dear Vandana,

It sounds like you are in the Monsoon season. I remember the monsoon season in India.

Love Bobby

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

4 posted 2008-11-18 02:11 PM

Wonderful write. Enjoyed.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2008-11-18 04:43 PM

beautiful metaphor.

yann

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2008-11-18 05:39 PM

vandana - I can feel the rain, and the longing for the sun to come out. Nice write.

BC

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2008-11-20 02:23 PM

Very beautiful.

Eric

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

8 posted 2008-11-20 02:42 PM

When the sun won't come out, I hope there is someone who will stay with me. I like the plaintive urgency of this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2008-11-20 09:19 PM

vandana, it would appear that you are a lot like me! ~ I like to play whether it rains or shines too!

Linda

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