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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2008-11-16 08:36 AM

As silence fades
and the broken heals,
the waiting of time
journeys the mind.

Every unturned page
partners the thoughts,
never knowing the next
beneath it all.

Words going separate ways,
life spiced on the move;
nothing is what it seems
and seams still need to be patched...

surrendering to life's storms.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2008-11-16 09:35 AM

lovely

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2008-11-16 03:07 PM

nakdthoughts - I enjoy reading your writings, always...

BC

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

3 posted 2008-11-16 05:13 PM

ah ::smiles:: (((nakdthoughts)))

yes

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2008-11-16 05:28 PM

Yo dear M,

Never surrender to life’s storms. They all pass away in time.

Love Bobby

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2008-11-16 06:01 PM

"nothing is what it seems" ...

no, typically it's only two or three times that bad!

fine 'write!'

Pantheress
Member

since 2008-11-02

Posts 215
Queensland, Australia

6 posted 2008-11-16 07:49 PM

I liked this, The wording was very interesting, thank you for sharing,smiles..

Sharon Rose
Member

since 2008-11-03

Posts 51

7 posted 2008-11-16 09:30 PM

There's always seams that need patching.
Enjoyed your poem.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

8 posted 2008-11-16 09:36 PM

m
stiches hem those rips every day sweets
h

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (11-17-2008 09:18 AM).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2008-11-17 06:40 AM

Thank you,Juju. I hope the world is treating you kindly.

Bill, thanks for the read and comment as always I appreciate the time you take to respond.

XOx Uriah xOX ah thanks for the hug and smiles

Bobby, like Bones, I have to go with the flow and hope for the best

Bruce, I always know that you will understand my words...thanks

Pantheress, my wording is often reversed or leaving the meaning up to the reader. Thank you for  the  visit.

Sharon Rose, Welcome  and thank you for stopping by

Helen, your  response made me smile~~ thanks

M

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

10 posted 2008-11-17 08:31 AM

No white flags.

just time to heal.

then proceed forward.

Very nice Ms. M!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

11 posted 2008-11-17 10:12 AM

Maureen I really like this one. I still have alot of those seams that need to be patched.

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

12 posted 2008-11-17 01:35 PM

Well said indeed, life's storms leave us wondering what to wear out, the unknowing can be exciting though, life is really just an amazing journey, it is unfortunate that we just find the way to live it so late in life. Enjoy your day my friend, turn that page of mystery and savour the words.

Rick

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

13 posted 2008-11-22 10:23 PM

So what do we do? We get out our bike tire kits and start patching away, Maureen. This is a good one that you wrote.

Hugs and smiles to you.
Alison

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

14 posted 2008-11-23 09:25 AM

Susan, sometimes tomorrow is just like yesterday

Sue, I sew, but my fingers are getting tired of patching ~~thanks

Rick, well maybe it's not too late for me...I am still waiting for the "amazing" part

Alison, can't go biking in the snow...guess I will have to wait for another Spring. Thank You

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