Open Poetry #43 |
When Love Dies |
Sharon Rose Member
since 2008-11-03
Posts 51 |
Within my heart a candle light. A brightness that lights the darkest night. Into the night a cold wind creeps. The candle light is put to sleep. [This message has been edited by Sharon Rose (11-15-2008 11:09 PM).] |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, nicely done. Just a note, it should be 'darkest' instead of 'darkess'. Don't you hate typos? I can read my poem through three times and still miss them. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thought provoking, Sharon. Enjoyed. Ida |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Know that feeling~~ short but precise M |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sharon - yes, many have been there. Keep posting, I like your poetry... BC |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
This is beautiful, I wish to send you a box of matches,smiles.. Take care of you and thanks for sharing this with me.. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
You said so much in so few words. I sure know how that feels. |
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