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my museum |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
If my life was a museum you would find there peaceful paintings from Edward Hopper and special Doves from Picasso, you would find too some kisses with their lipstick and a mysterious hat from my father’s shop, You would find two or three looks from girls i can’t forget And an old Buick from the sixties, You would find pompous photos from New York and from my parent’s house, I would hang up too the kindness of my sisters and the inspiration of my brothers, I would show Gone with the Wind, But above all if my life was a museum You would find love and the entrance would be free. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Your museum sounds like wonderful place to visit, yann. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Yann, it sounds to me as though you would be a millionnaire if the entrance wasn't free! - Owl |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Yann, I like anything that's free. This is an excellent poem, and I like it loads. Bobby |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love the ending but this touched me "I would hang up too the kindness of my sisters and the inspiration of my brothers" M |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
... and I would visit and enjoy the displays every day. Alison |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh definitely yes, it would make me want to visit your museum daily too my lovely Yann.. I really enjoyed this poem of yours... thank you.. love and hugs RDB for me this is a   Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
okkk... let's try that again to save it to my library shall we?? LOL!! yes, I know, I'm having a blonde moment!! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is very beautiful, dear Yann, as are you. I would love to visit this kind of museum! Love, Margherita |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Sounds like a great museum to visit. |
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