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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Media tool My birthday ended Like any other My father and I We fought like hornets Girls in bikinis Was I a girl too... Will this be my life And my own father Wont change the channel I felt old that day Once when I'm too old The channel will turn Cause nothings free When your no longer Something beautiful No longer sexy Just a prostitute To be abandoned On a dark lit street -Juju -"So you found a girl Who thinks really deep thougts What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Good Juju John . |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i love the new pic beautiful you cut your hair |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Juju, This is very good work, on a very sad subject. That's the way it is sometimes. I have two beautiful daughters. One is a wife and mother, the other is a marine biologist. I still do fight with them when we're together. Love Bobby |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
So harsh.. So well written.. Thanks for sharing.. |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
I'm in love with you! I likez the poem. Dang it... Falling in love with poetic people you don't know that are probably married and live multiple states or countries away is the worst. Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
good |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This is a sad one Juju!   to you  ARCTIC WIND |
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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
I appreciate your expression and candor. Very good work. Hal |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you everyone -Juju |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
JuJu lovely you...stay your course and let your dreams come true M |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
excellent writing Juju.. I love your new pic! love and hugs RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
reminded me of this: "When you're looking for truth on the cover of a magazie How does it feel When you find out what you're not gonna be They give you your image and the things you believe Open your eyes tell me what did you see And I just think you thought it surreal How does it feel when you're out on your own And now it's too late to come home And it's hard to be free when you're down on your knees Take it easy till you make it alone" What a scene by the goo goo dolls. enjoyed. The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you so much I appreciate your comments and thoughts Juli -Juju |
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