Open Poetry #43 |
starlight |
norunnin Member
since 2008-10-16
Posts 71 |
hello star i thougt i was alone but there you are shine on me from afar pleas shine on my heart starlight so far light give me a new start renew my blackened heart take me apart and take me by my hand walk with me keep me company on this lonely journey ???????? (its not finished im gonna sleep on it) |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I am sure it will turn out the way you want it to -Juju |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You are on a great journey with this piece. I keep stopping back to see how you have finished it. You should, you know?!! Excellent beginning. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Good start. I'll look forward to see the finished piece. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Improving New Member
since 2008-11-08
Posts 8 |
Wow this is quite good. Dont give up on it, it will come to you. |
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norunnin Member
since 2008-10-16
Posts 71 |
to find me |
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