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Open Poetry #43
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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2008-11-11 05:26 PM



Scattered pictures
Shattered dreams
All that’s left are memories

Broken promises
Unrealized desires
Remnants
Of what we shared

You’re gone
In the beat of a heart
And I’m alone

And I never got to say goodbye
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Pilgrimage
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1 posted 2008-11-11 05:30 PM

How very sad.

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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
2 posted 2008-11-12 07:25 PM

A powerful piece!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC
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3 posted 2008-11-13 04:12 PM

This one grabs me right in the gut... and that's good writing! *S*
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