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Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2008-11-10 10:32 PM

Mona Lisa,
Goddess sprawled in satin sheets;
her skin glistens of disappointments and hopes
she's fragile, yet strong
she wants you, but she'll never let you know
she'll smile and act nonchalant;
when you tell her that she's beautiful
but, she'll linger for awhile inside her mind;
resisting the urge to pull you in closer,
hiding behind laughter and sex appeal
if she were to fall,
she wouldn't give you the chance to catch her,
she's vulnerable,
because, she thinks if she lets you in, you'll disappoint her tomorrow

The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2008-11-10 10:38 PM

Kirsten,

that's one of the best interpretations I've seen in quite a while of whom she might have been.

Well done!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-11-11 06:17 AM

Kristen.. the lovely in you shines in this.. beautiful gifting here ... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-11-11 06:26 AM

Well done, yes. Of course I think we should never anticipate disappointment and then withdraw from something that might well evolve into something gratifying and beautiful. Fear of suffering has deleterious effects.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now