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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Some times When you imagine No one Is paying attention I’ll watch you Cross a room Comb your hair Back with a sweep Of your hand Smile at a scene That for a moment Passes through your mind Then I know It’s good to be here That there’s nowhere else I’d rather be Though not much Of a bird In the usual world Sometimes The sparrow sings . |
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americangothic Junior Member
since 2008-11-11
Posts 45 |
when you love someone you notice all the little things.....things that make you love them even more |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Hoping that the female sparrow will join in the song "some time/s". - Owl |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I also enjoy very much details and cozyness...Great work. yann |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like the split between the 'some' and the 'times'. And the ending metaphor--priceless. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
another fine 'slice of life' impression! serious applause for this 'penning'! |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
Awww.. That's to sweet,smiles.. |
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