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Ericc
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0 posted 2008-10-21 01:30 PM



Drink me
Pure as
Water -
A pool against
Your lips,
Until taken in the
Thirst of your
Existence.



© Copyright 2008 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
steavenr
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1 posted 2008-10-21 03:39 PM


pithy...emotes well...thoroughly enjoyed
Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2008-10-21 03:48 PM



God speaking ... words that trickle directly into the soul.

I am speechless, dear Eric!


Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2008-10-21 06:34 PM


and you have converted me to a sponge.


Bill Charles
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4 posted 2008-10-23 12:09 PM


Ericc - short, but very meaningful, nice write...

BC

Honeybunch
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5 posted 2008-10-23 04:12 AM


I guess we do have to make it clear what we want and you have done it extremely well.

Love
Helen

shortsleeves
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6 posted 2008-11-10 01:05 PM


Beautiful thoughts of unity Eric.
Thank you,
Hal

Artic Wind
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7 posted 2008-11-10 06:01 PM


This is a wonderful write with romance! ~ Enjoyed this write deeply!


ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2008-11-12 06:13 PM


Nice...James
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