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shadows on the wall |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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serendipitous shadows dance on the wall fleeting flickering fantasies mine is small, seemingly insignificant the acorn doesn't concern itself |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Kacy, This is great. Any shadow that doesn't bother the acorns is okay with me. Love Bobby |
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americangothic Junior Member
since 2008-11-11
Posts 45 |
short and well written nice job |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Ah, but the acorn grows into a beautiful spreading tree! A lot of food for thought within that tiny seed. Lovely, Kacy. - Owl |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
You are a trooper! It's wonderful to see you writing. And so philosophical that you're over my head. But I always liked that about you.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
the acorn says thank youWelcome to Pips, AmericanGothic |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
We are indeed ... 'acorns' of this grand-scintillating Universe ... May those shadows always dance! interesting contemplative 'penning'! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"the acorn doesn't concern itself" That's the best line I've read in forever... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What is more beautiful than the tree the acorn grows into, Kacy? Serenity and grace are words that come to mind. Ida |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Such a wonderful write, Kacy. It was only last night that I came across a very old story of mine about an acorn so I'll post it as it seems that we both had acorns on our minds. So good to see you posting. My very best to you. Hugs Helen |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Duncan! What a wonderful treat to have you visit. Thanks for that comment.  Ida, Helen, and Bruce...you are so good to me! I would not feel so hopeful if I had to face this thing alone. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Ouu Kacy, this is one excellent poem!!!! ~Really enjoyed reading your beautifully penned write!  to youARCTIC WIND |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
 It's so good to see you writing again! I gotta agree the acorn line is my fave  The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Your shadow, like the acorn, is contemplating greater things to come. Nicely phrased, and it gave me something to chew on. I like that sometimes.Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The future tree that is me appreciates this very much.  Lovely, you! |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Kacy, this is very beautiful! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kacy - a most enjoyable writing... BC |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
does an 'acorn' floating in a 'Deep-Time' universe without 'walls' cast a shadow?! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Kacy, it is so good to see you back on PIP and I sincerely pray you are on your way to a complete recovery. May God watch over you and grant you good health, and I loved your post. Love Lindsay |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Nice poetic potpourri of 'comment/reply' posts! continuing applause for them and this 'penning'! |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Nice to see you post again. I enjoyed this and hope you are feeling better. Take care. Steve |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You know, Piglet called them "Haycorns". So, my haycorn friend, well written in your beautiful way. Love to see you writing and feeling better. Alison |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Nice thing about flickering fantasies is that means there is a breeze of promise tickling the flame. Nicely penned and worth much contemplation. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
tight construction of a well written write...enjoyed |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There is such beautiful wisdom in your words, dear Kacy! Love, Margherita |
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