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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-07-13 11:39 AM


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In green shadows
Of summer willows
Two sparrows
Hunting worms


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XGarapanX
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1 posted 2008-07-13 11:48 AM


Ah!!! Another satisfying exhale.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

SarBear
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2 posted 2008-07-13 12:21 PM


I enjoy this. It paints a picture in few words.
Margherita
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3 posted 2008-07-14 05:28 PM


Love this beginning as well. Peaceful.


Margherita

vandana
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4 posted 2008-07-14 05:37 PM


enjoyed
secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2008-11-14 12:09 PM


I'd like to press a 'season change/weather modification'
button and return (or advance) to this time and place!

nice succinct 'impression'!

applause!!

Mark Bohannan
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6 posted 2008-11-14 01:02 PM


Visually appealing in it's content.  Enjoyed the lack of boundaries this one can imspire.
Robert E. Jordan
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7 posted 2008-11-14 01:55 PM


John,

This is very nice.  Sparrows are quite the hunters.

Bobby

OwlSA
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8 posted 2008-11-16 09:59 AM


My type of Sunday morning - harmony, beauty, silent support and communication - and sustenance!

- Owl

OwlSA
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9 posted 2008-11-16 10:02 AM


I wasn't referring to owls eating sparrows!  I meant sparrows eating worms.

- Owl

steavenr
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10 posted 2008-11-16 08:42 PM


you've painted a lovely picture of the solemnity of nature, coupled with the natural order of things...all in such few words...nicely done
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