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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria 
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DISCIPLINE What is wrong with the world today That society is so riddled with strife, With rape and murder, bashings and theft, It’s becoming a hazardous way of life. As moral fibre of society disintegrates, It’s becoming a harder battle to win, It seems the only way to right the wrongs Is to bring back strict discipline. I went to school in those depression years, Mischevious, though never a dunce, I remember when my father spoke to me, He spoke to me only once. So that I wouldn’t hasten his wrath I immediately done as was told, I was raised in a family that was loving and kind, An environment more precious than gold. While in the school room every day The teacher had strict defenses, Should your conduct be lacking in grace You suffered the consequences. Nearly every teacher had a strap And nearly all were ready to use it, If you were unwilling to abide by the rules, Peace of mind, you were liable to loose it. You’ve all had experience with unruly kids, Who on your furniture they continue to trample They not only need discipline to show them what’s right, They need to be shown by example. Graffiti and vandalism was nearly unknown And your car there was no need to lock, Your house was as safe as a vault in a bank, Oh, if we could only turn back the clock. Today a lot of parents are losing control, For on chastisement most seem to frown, Children run riot and do as they please, Makes me wonder just who is the clown. If human conduct continues it’s spiral downhill, I just shudder to think what might is in store, It’s not hard to see what the outcome will be When discipline flies out the door. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Lindsay, I am sure we are all a little too loving to our kids at times and let them get away with too much, we all want our children to have a better life than what we did hey. The trouble is without disipline in the early years, things start to backfire and make you shake your head in disbelief. It is a very wise write that you have penned Lindsay, as parents all we can do is our best, enjoyed my friend, take care and be well. Rick |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: That's the key sentence, dear Lindsay. I understand your outpour of concern. Discipline is very important and LOVE is essential. We all need to awaken to Love. That's when we really become aware of being ONE and when we act towards others the way we wish that others act towards us. Thank you for this thought provoking piece, presented in your usual beautiful form. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
Love your work, your very good at this,smiles.. Not all children of today are raised unruly,smiles.. We also have a faster pace and greater expectations for children today.. The pressure of living in this world is hard for most adults, Let alone our little ones. although I can really relate to what your saying,smiles.. Thanks for sharing, its great.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
LindsayP - I understand your writing, and are in amazement the way things have changed. Not so sure if it's for the better or not... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I always enjoy reading your thoughts, observations and perspectives on anything ~ and everything. With change, comes some good things! ~ and some not so good things. You shine a light on the latter. Fine writing! Love 'n hugs, Linda |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I remember when the house was safe and you didn't have to lock the door. I think those times are gone forever for exactly the reasons you stated. Ida |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
To my very good friends, Rick, Margherita, Pantheress, Bill, James, Linda and Ida, seeing as I haven't posted for a couple of weeks it was a big thrill to see all your kind comments, it made my day. Thank you all, God bless and take care. Lindsay |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo LindsayP, Cut me some slack here. I've never been to Victoria, but I've been to Melbourne, and the little town of Altoona, outside of Melbourne. I was there doing some engineering consulting work. I locked myself out of my car there, and had to break into it without doing damage to it, as it was a rental car. Some local kids were watching me as I broke into the thing--they said "That's incredible." Of course that was in my younger days, about fifteen years ago, when I was only 57 years young. I learned to break into cars in Altoona, PA when I was about the age of those Australian kids watching me. Things haven't gone to the dogs Lindsay. Things, life in general, and the kids improve each shining hour. Bobby |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dear Lindsay.. this was a wonderful read! of course I was a very good girl when I was growing up so no need for discipline  love and hugs RDB xxx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I agree! They do need to bring back strict disipline. I was sitting here last night with the news on, when they told on the news about how many gang members are right here in my city. Then, I thought about the fact, that I have to come home after dark from work on the weekends. I work every weekend. It's very scarey. Fortunately, my neighborhood seems to be real quiet most of the time. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
There should always be options that preclude corporal punishment, especially for the younger ones. But I do agree, there seems to be rampant lack of respect and discipline and almost no accountability until it's too late. Had to chuckle at Bobby's reply. I once was locked out of my car, instead of calling the locksmith, I walked around the corner where a 'friendly' gangster type lived, and enlisted his help. No broken glass, no scratches on the door either. When he was done, he said "You owe me a beer, m'am" I bought him a six pack! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Ah Bobby, now I know the reason why the crime rate went up in the mid nineties out around Altona, but seeing you are not a bad bloke, I won't tell anyone. I know there are a lot of good kids in society today but there is an alarming number of vandals, thieves and graffiti artists that cause an enormous amount of trouble. Your comments always appreciated. Dear Roniece, I know you are too nice of person to have got into any trouble when you were a teenager but i'm afraid they are not all like you, Thanks for responding. Thank you Rose for your comments, I'm glad you live in a reasonably quiet area and I certainly hope that you have a trouble free life and can enjoy the job that you do. Dear Midnightsun, I'M sure most gangster types would come to the aid of a lovely lady like yourself, for they do have some endearing features, or I think most of them would have. Thanks for the response. |
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