Open Poetry #43 |
Come Now, Rest |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Come now, rest your weary heart upon my breast and I will hold you until you feel that you are strong with enough courage to move on. Together we will wipe your tears away; should you need me come another day I will be here for you so that you may find a moment of peace for your troubled mind. Time will heal your broken wings someday, again soon you're soul will sing. Come now, rest while I hold you in friendships stay when tomorrow comes I shall watch as you soar away. © dmsmith |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Her name To me Is Sarah Though Donna Is good As well John > |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
John, thank you for blessing my words with your presence. Your visits are very appreciated. ~D |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Donna, this tugs at my heartstrings. So beautifully sensitive. Love, Margherita |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
((Margherita)) Thank you sweetie for stopping by my words today. Your visits are appreciated hon. Hugs n peace ~D |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Wow!! Donna.. this is so beautiful! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Donna, this is just beautiful. You always did have a way with words. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - this is just beautiful in words and the graphic. A most touching write... BC |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A touching write indeed, tt purveys a feeling of comfort!! "A spring shower was cause to run Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
I will be here for you so that you may find a moment of peace for your troubled mind. Beautiful words in a very poignant poem my dear, so well written. Much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
A gem of warmt and care, which touch the heart you've Penned here. Thanks for sharing Theresia |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Comfort sealed in grace of heart. Very nice. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
a beautiful write filled with the encouragement of hope...good feelings from this one...well done...thank you for sharing |
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Pantheress Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215Queensland, Australia |
So gentle, So beautiful.. Thank you. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Donna, This is what I miss when you are not here for a long time. I miss your beauty, kindness and wonderful poetry. I miss you. Love always, Alison |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
A beautiful Presentation!!! ARCTIC WIND |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Some things are too beautiful to be buried. So, beautiful poem written by a beautiful poet .. off you go to the top again. xooxxo A |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Whoever inspired this is so very lucky!!! Not only is the poem beautiful... the sentiment is one I'd sacrifice a limb or two to have felt for me. *S* Beautiful!!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Pip fam, you all make me smile so huge and each one of your replies is so greatly appreciated. Thanks so much, hugs n peace ~D |
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