Open Poetry #43 |
![]() ![]() |
Fallen |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
As rain...once fallen - Becoming to the ground of its desire. I fall to you. |
||
© Copyright 2008 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved | |||
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are both the rain and the target, for you know about true oneness. Intense emotion, both in the receiving and in the giving role! Stunning. ![]() Margherita |
||
2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Ericc, wonderful idea of the rain falling...Thanks for the poem. yann |
||
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Beautiful, Eric. - Owl |
||
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! |
||
Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is one of my favorite poems - it is beautiful, Eric. A |
||
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I'm searching for another adjective because I think I've already used all the appropriate ones. Unfortunately it's Sunday night here and that's the time my mind wanders into ... itself perhaps so I'll just add another "WOW". Helen |
||
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
beautiful! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
||
![]() ![]() |
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |