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Open Poetry #43

Fallen

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2008-07-19 03:46 PM

As rain...once
fallen -
Becoming to the
ground of its
desire.

I fall to you.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-07-19 04:26 PM

You are both the rain and the target, for you know about true oneness.

Intense emotion, both in the receiving and in the giving role!

Stunning.

Margherita

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2008-07-19 04:51 PM

Hi Ericc, wonderful idea of the rain falling...Thanks for the poem.

yann

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2008-07-20 05:40 AM

Beautiful, Eric.

- Owl

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2008-07-20 06:10 AM

wow!

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2008-07-20 01:48 PM

This is one of my favorite poems - it is beautiful, Eric.

A

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

6 posted 2008-07-20 02:06 PM

I'm searching for another adjective because I think I've already used all the appropriate ones. Unfortunately it's Sunday night here and that's the time my mind wanders into ... itself perhaps so I'll just add another "WOW".

Helen

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

7 posted 2008-07-20 10:22 PM

beautiful! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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