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Open Poetry #43
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-07-19 03:36 PM

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A deeply dark
Green day

Opened windows
In the breeze

On all the trees
Branches sway

Rain is falling
From the sky


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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-07-19 04:30 PM

Refreshing, as I inhale the rain's scent.

I love your succinct style, John.

Margherita
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