Open Poetry #43 |
Mother Hood's Differentials |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Rarely could I call that love, but it did make me a mother; and I can look and say it thus: "Once upon a time we were, one--if not the same." I know it must be difficult. It's not the same for you. But even if we made not love, you've become a "mother" too. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
K~ Don't need anyone to tell me why I like this one !!! (Mothers united !!) And I SOOOOO like this one !!! You are my kinda rascal, for sure !!! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*slaps five* I loves ya, lady! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
~grin |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm still surprised, lately, at the brevity you've exhibited.. [ok, so I love your ramblings] but my dear heart...you are never a "short" read! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
K&K? Sometimes when I write, I just think "better OUT than in..." this was one of those times. Loved to you both! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Clever, sarcastic and just plain funny. Ida |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
This gave me several feelings of connection. Short but full of wisdom and emotion. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Certainly enjoyed this one, K and love M |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent write! Eric |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thanks for reading and hmmm.... maybe I could make a compilation of The Menopause Diaries? Mom's a little moody these days... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This seems like one of those moments within conversation, where you suddenly feel completely okay with saying, "Hey, I know much better, and this is why. Oh, and you'll know much better some day, too!" I loved this. I can't wait until I can experience something like this. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Something about you (and your writing) that touches me deep inside. Alison |
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