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Open Poetry #43

Poem i wrote

bradley6
New Member

since 2008-11-08

Posts 7

0 posted 2008-11-08 09:17 AM

Decisions and thoughts are consuming the mind
The feeling is no longer there
Control is what I need
But I’ve done too much to come back.

Give me something I want but I know you won’t
My best is never enough
I need some kind of sign
But there is just so much i can’t turn back.

The anxiety is just to much to bear
I tell myself to live without a care
I’m not like them, because I don’t like them
I want to go back.

Home is where I want to be
But it’s not going to ever be the same
This isn’t how I envisioned it
Please just let me go back.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-11-08 02:53 PM

Welcome, Bradley, to Pip!

The pain is felt in your poem, you convey your anxiety very well.

There is no return, you can only live in the now and try to BE love.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

2 posted 2008-11-08 03:15 PM

That's a tough place to be. Welcome.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2008-11-08 05:30 PM

Sad Write indeed...

WELCOME TO PIP!

ARCTIC WIND

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