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Perhaps Like Heaven
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Perhaps Like Heaven |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Perhaps Like Heaven In a perfect world, perhaps like Heaven there would be no lack or limitations, no boundaries nor separations, no missing, no lack of kissing, no lonely nights with opportunities missed. In a perfect world roadblocks to love and affection would not exist; only the pleasures of my sweethearts kiss. JamesLee 07November 2008 |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah yes, James so it would be in such a world. How very nicely you have penned this piece.... Eric IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
In the heart lies the world you speak of!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
So poignant, James. I feel the longing you have for your sweetheart. Alison |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Then, dear Island Man, there truly would be Heaven on Earth!  ~ May that be true for you!  Linda |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you James for these beautiful and touching verses, the metaphors are not in a dead end if i can say...Very beautiful indeed. regards yann |
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