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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2008-11-06 07:10 AM



        
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In midst of chaos

knowing eyes behold beauty

harmony unfolds


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© Copyright 2008 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
amusemi
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1 posted 2008-11-06 08:23 AM


Gorgeous presentation.  Love it!
Bill Charles
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2 posted 2008-11-06 12:21 PM


Margherita - very nice, so much meaning in so few words. Liked this presentation, and in depth writing...

BC

OwlSA
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3 posted 2008-11-06 02:57 PM


Mmmm!  I am basking in the serenity.

- Owl

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2008-11-06 03:05 PM


Yo dear Margherita,

This haiku packs a lot of meaning.  I like the picture too.

Love Bobby

Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2008-11-06 03:41 PM


that is my hope.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Mark Bohannan
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6 posted 2008-11-06 05:14 PM


Not only beautifully constructed but also filled with much wisdom and hope.  Wonderful to read.
secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2008-11-06 06:48 PM


I think this one is particularly excellent!
[both the poetic and graphics imagery]

serious and sustained applause!!

poddarku
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india
8 posted 2008-11-06 11:19 PM


Life has been simple, deep and intense in the begining, your poem's short and sweetness make me remember it.
2islander2
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9 posted 2008-11-07 12:05 PM


a very attracting poem for the mind, let's my mind rest in beauty.

best wishes

  yann

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2008-11-07 05:39 PM


Very nice...James
ethome
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11 posted 2008-11-07 06:18 PM


Quite a talent to be so concise and meaningful.

Good write

Eric

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12 posted 2008-11-07 07:59 PM


ANOTHER beautiful poem Margherita!!!
~BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL!!!~


ARCTIC WIND

Marchmadness
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13 posted 2008-11-08 04:20 AM


Lovely, Margharita. Fills the spaces with a sense of peace.
                               Ida

Margherita
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14 posted 2008-11-08 09:30 AM


Thank you all my dear poet friends for your loving replies!

Have a great week-end!
Love,
Margherita

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15 posted 2008-11-09 01:38 AM


Margherita,

Your eyes know beauty and you gracefully express what they see - your heart also sees it and we are blessed to be around you.

Alison

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2008-11-09 02:11 AM


Maga Margherita, I adore your knowing eyes.
~ And you share what you see so beautifully.


Linda

Rick
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17 posted 2008-11-09 02:52 AM


Dear Margherita, I loved the words and the image my friend, very well done.

Rick
  

nourzihane
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18 posted 2008-11-09 06:01 AM


In midst of chaos

knowing eyes behold beauty

harmony unfolds

****************
Margherita

your poem is very short but

has big  meanings which has

nice words

thank you for this words

with my regards

nourzihane


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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19 posted 2008-11-09 06:13 AM


knowing eyes hold beauty...


yes, dear Margherita.. there is much beauty to be found on these pages blue... and you definitely are one of them... this was so lovely..  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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20 posted 2008-11-10 10:45 AM


Thanks to each of you, my dear Poet friends! I enjoyed your replies.

Have a great week!

Love,
Margherita

shortsleeves
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21 posted 2008-11-10 01:07 PM


Excellent Haiku Margherita.
Love,
Hal

Charisma
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22 posted 2008-11-10 05:59 PM


Beautiful!!

Charisma

secondhanddreampoet
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23 posted 2008-11-12 04:06 PM


I just had to 'officially' come back to this one...LOVE the imagery!! (both poetic and graphic)

continuing serious applause!

LindsayP
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24 posted 2008-11-12 10:08 PM



Great haiku my dear Helen and deep meaning words.

love  Lindsay

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