Open Poetry #43 |
a moment in pink |
Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
when i grow up, i shall be a princess (for a queen has too much responsibility and a princess has her own phone) i shall twirl you around my magic wand and carry you like eye candy wrapped around my princessly regal finger you will spoil me and love me and polish my pink princess throne and i will wear your adoration as my cloak and we will be happy when I grow up - Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Alison, for this early morning smile. Absolutely lovely moment in pink! Love, Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh I love this my Ali-girl!! and if I knew how to say it in PINK I would!! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
nice work little one |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Do you think we ever grow up? M |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
ah...a fine celebration of the 'child' within us all! a most pleasant 'write'! applause!! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I like the little girl innocense here |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Alison, this brings back all of my "pink" memories. Love, Ida |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Well Ali, you are already royalty (as each human being is). And you are already grown up! You need not wait! I know this, for you have immense strength, and yet great tenderness and compassion. You are stronger than all this world can throw at you. And you have me. You are, indeed, royalty; yet at the same time also human. Twirl me, dance me, Gentle me and tenderize my heart. And I would gladly be your footstool----if you want. because you are like royalty to me. but right now I have to get something to eat. because without coffee there is no life. Friendship is for Life, if not Forever. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Princess Alison, this poem is as sweet and charming as you are! Lucky be the prince who wins your precious heart! Sending a bubble of pink loving Light to surround you! Linda |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Magherita, Thank you for looking in and smiling with me. Love, Alison - RDB, Thank you, lovely one. Pink is so ummm pink. How articulate is that? xooxxo Ali-girl - D Thank you, friend of mine. xoxoxo A - Maureen, I certainly hope not. Wanna have a tea party some time? Alison - Bruce, Thank you. My inner child will never grow old. Love, Alison - Ida, My littlest friend would say to get out your pink and dance! Love, Alison - Jaime, Ah, you are such a friend. Thank you for this kind and thoughtful reply to my poem. Let's talk soon and catch up. xoxoxo Alison - Linda, You make my heart smile. Alison |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
exquisite Alison, this is absoluttly enjoyable...I ask for more. yann |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely Write Alison! ARCTIC WIND |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
That was simply beautiful. And it made me smile in a kind of way. -Juju |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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visitvenus Member
since 2002-12-30
Posts 101PA, USA |
I needed that smile -- thank you for sharing this! |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I don't think I ever want to grow up. LOL! there's too much responsibility. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
yann, Thank you ... I'll try to write you a rainbow. xoxoxo Alison - Thank you, AW. Hugs, A - Juju, Thank you - you are a kind person. Alison - vandana, Thank you for stopping and taking the time to comment. Alison - visitingvenus, Thank you for enjoying and letting me know that you did. Hugs, Alison - Oklahoma Rose, I don't want to either. Alison |
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noorOH New Member
since 2008-11-09
Posts 4 |
this is so optimistic i can never right joyful stuff, though my life isnt bad i just dont know why great job!! |
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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
Thank you for the beautiful twirl. Chi-fully, Hal |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"(for a queen has too much responsibility and a princess has her own phone)" oh what a pink delight Alison |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
That's extraordinary! I loved every well-turned phrase. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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