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Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2008-11-06 01:52 AM


when i grow up, i shall be a princess
(for a queen has too much responsibility
and a princess has her own phone)
i shall twirl you around my magic wand
and carry you like eye candy wrapped
around my princessly regal finger
        you will spoil me and love me
        and polish my pink princess throne
and i will wear your adoration
as my cloak and we will be happy

        when I grow up


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Alison

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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-11-06 02:51 AM


Thank you, dear Alison, for this early morning smile. Absolutely lovely moment in pink!

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2008-11-06 03:50 AM


oh I love this my Ali-girl!!  and if I knew how to say it in PINK I would!!   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2008-11-06 06:17 AM


nice work little one
nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2008-11-06 06:40 AM


Do you think we ever grow up?



M

secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2008-11-07 04:10 PM


ah...a fine celebration of the 'child' within us all!

a most pleasant 'write'!

applause!!

inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2008-11-07 04:14 PM


I like the little girl innocense here
Marchmadness
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7 posted 2008-11-08 04:15 AM


Alison, this brings back all of my "pink" memories.
                                 Love,
                                      Ida

Jaime Fradera
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8 posted 2008-11-08 01:44 PM


Well Ali, you are already royalty (as each human being is).
And you are already grown up! You need not wait!
I know this, for you have immense strength,
and yet great tenderness and compassion.
You are stronger than all this world can throw at you.
And you have me.

You are, indeed, royalty;
yet at the same time also human.
Twirl me, dance me,
Gentle me and tenderize my heart.
And I would gladly be your footstool----if you want.
because you are like royalty to me.
but right now I have to get something to eat.
because without coffee there is no life.

Friendship is for Life, if not Forever.

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2008-11-08 01:50 PM


Princess Alison, this poem is as sweet and charming as you are! Lucky be the prince who wins your precious heart!

Sending a bubble of pink loving Light to surround you!


Linda

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10 posted 2008-11-09 02:42 AM


Magherita,

Thank you for looking in and smiling with me.

Love,
Alison

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RDB,

Thank you, lovely one.  Pink is so ummm pink.  How articulate is that?

xooxxo
Ali-girl

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D

Thank you, friend of mine.

xoxoxo
A

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Maureen,

I certainly hope not.  Wanna have a tea party some time?

Alison

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Bruce,

Thank you.  My inner child will never grow old.

Love,
Alison

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Ida,

My littlest friend would say to get out your pink and dance!

Love,
Alison

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Jaime,

Ah, you are such a friend.  Thank you for this kind and thoughtful reply to my poem.  Let's talk soon and catch up.

xoxoxo
Alison

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Linda,

You make my heart smile.

Alison

2islander2
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11 posted 2008-11-09 04:06 AM


exquisite Alison, this is absoluttly enjoyable...I ask for more.

yann

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12 posted 2008-11-09 10:54 AM


Lovely Write Alison!


ARCTIC WIND

Juju
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13 posted 2008-11-09 11:04 AM


That was simply beautiful.  And it made me smile  in a kind of way.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

vandana
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14 posted 2008-11-09 11:06 AM


enjoyed
visitvenus
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15 posted 2008-11-09 08:03 PM


I needed that smile -- thank you for sharing this!
Oklahoma Rose
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16 posted 2008-11-09 09:25 PM


I don't think I ever want to grow up. LOL! there's too much responsibility.
Alison
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17 posted 2008-11-10 01:40 AM


yann,

Thank you ... I'll try to write you a rainbow.

xoxoxo
Alison

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Thank you, AW.

Hugs,
A

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Juju,

Thank you - you are a kind person.

Alison

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vandana,

Thank you for stopping and taking the time to comment.

Alison

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visitingvenus,

Thank you for enjoying and letting me know that you did.

Hugs,
Alison

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Oklahoma Rose,

I don't want to either.

Alison

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18 posted 2008-11-10 03:08 PM


this is so optimistic i can never right joyful stuff, though my life isnt bad
i just dont know why
great job!!


shortsleeves
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19 posted 2008-11-10 03:16 PM


Thank you for the beautiful twirl.
Chi-fully,
Hal

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20 posted 2008-11-10 03:37 PM




"(for a queen has too much responsibility
and a princess has her own phone)"

oh what a pink delight Alison


Pilgrimage
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21 posted 2008-11-11 05:26 PM


That's extraordinary!  I loved every well-turned phrase.  

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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