Open Poetry #43 |
Copernicus |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Hello Yes I’ve been Expecting you For some time It’s beautiful weather Yet of course it’s autumn Which is my favorite season As you know It really Doesn’t take much To make me happy here These days . . . Simple meals A friend or two Not that I Don’t have Sadness . . . though It never seems To last For very long— I’m sorry to hear After all these years That your life Didn’t turned out All that well Tonight for me Moon viewing With wine On my balcony Watching the myriad stars Glimmer their silent symphonies And by the way The answer’s no . |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Copernicus would chase those 'wandering' planets through that starfield of 'silent symphonies'! a most interesting impressionistic "slice-of-life" penning! applause!! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
at the heart of self-defense in all matters of relationships is the need to say no...excellent write |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank You both Very good Steaven Thanks again John |
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