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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-11-05 06:05 AM

I watched your shuffling of smooth
for a month of sundays you were easy
on the eyes and on the hopeability

like a car sales machine with grease on
and your cocoa puff commentary
how you had a lot of magic in your wand

and could find the middle of a road
in the gutter of any one way
even during rush hour you could change

directions with out losing your traction
and that was the attraction too
for so many with hungry for healing on

but before you dealt, I saw you renege

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daark

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2008-11-05 06:10 AM

a beautiful offering Mr Daark.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2008-11-06 01:42 AM

Oh man! I was playing Pinochle the other night - had a wonderful hand and was going to end the game in a hurry. Yep, I reneged.

D, your poetry does something to me inside myself.

A

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2008-11-06 06:18 AM

ms r&b, thanks ms

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little ms ali-san...thanks babe...this one will come back later.....since it is political

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2008-11-06 06:36 AM

on a re-read definitely "political"
in your Dark kind of way~~

M

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2008-11-06 07:49 AM

To hear that it is political makes me understand it too and I think it is a very sharp-edged write, presented with your extraordinary linguistic dominance.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2008-11-06 10:23 AM

Ms MMs thanks teacher (grin)
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Ms mar thanks babe

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2008-11-06 11:04 AM

Yes, I agree with Maureen. But, I still reneged on an dreamer hand in cut-throat, double deck Pinochle.

And, I still feel your poems inside.

A

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2008-11-06 11:13 AM

Pinichole is that little woodie guy right? Grin

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

9 posted 2008-11-06 01:53 PM

chocolate-y goodness
floating, waiting to be dunked
by his well worn spoon.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2008-11-06 02:16 PM

Ms indi: a well worn brim of tin appears like silver to the mistress that closes her eyes

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

11 posted 2008-11-06 07:13 PM

Mmmmm... I'm waiting. ;-)

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

12 posted 2008-11-07 06:51 AM

ms indi...you are such a tease.

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