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young_blood
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0 posted 2008-11-05 01:14 AM


Paper Eyeglasses

I've been watching you cut
holes in the sky with your nail,
poking your fingers through to capture god,
but it seems a bit circular doesn't it?

To hold god in your palm is to master
yourself.

© Copyright 2008 Alex Lewis - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-11-05 05:58 AM


Alex.. I enjoyed this very much!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

amusemi
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2 posted 2008-11-05 08:37 AM


I loved this...especially your last line.
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3 posted 2008-11-06 01:33 AM


This is interesting to think about.

Alison

young_blood
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4 posted 2008-11-06 07:00 AM


Glad that it is causing you to pause for a moment. Thank you for reading.
Ceinwyn
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5 posted 2008-11-07 07:27 PM


the mastering myself seems to be the hardest right now..but loved this

The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone.

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2008-11-07 07:29 PM


young_blood - interesting thoughtful read...

BC

young_blood
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7 posted 2008-11-10 07:48 PM


I'm glad that both of you enjoyed it.
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