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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2008-11-04 04:07 PM


I developed this nagging pain in my neck
Radiating electric bolts of agony

“I am flexible,
I embrace change”

But I let them build, those thoughts
Allowed to get the best of me

“I am flexible,
I embrace change”

I will learn because time protects
With her patient canopy

“I am flexible,
I embrace change”

Affirming
Relearning

“I am flexible,
I embrace change”


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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2008-11-04 04:13 PM


Good for you.  We will all need to embrace change or fall by the wayside.  Joyce
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2008-11-05 04:32 AM


Affirming
Relearning


yes, Robert, we need to do more of this... I enjoyed reading this very much... love RDB x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Sunshine
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3 posted 2008-11-05 03:03 PM


I read so many things into this poem, that it's best if I just nod and approve of your poetic prowess and thank you once again for being here, and being you.



P.S. - I read it yesterday, too!

steavenr
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4 posted 2008-11-05 03:06 PM


"I will learn because time protects
With her patient canopy"

this line is a gem in an amazing write of the indefatigable spirit

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