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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2008-11-03 05:46 PM

The clouds are lifting
as I watch the weightless wisps
shape my thoughts
into the quiet of your mind.

I seam them into quilts
of remembrances,
tieing the mysts
into illusions of tomorrow's when...

Seduced by the calmness
of a life translated in understanding,
able to let go of the swords
of another time.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-11-03 08:27 PM

Yo dear M,

This is a very smooth write.

Love Bobby

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2008-11-03 08:32 PM

nakdthoughts - always did like your writings, this one is one of them. We must do a duet...

BC

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2008-11-03 08:56 PM

I was going to highlight and comment on the first stanza, then I read the second (and it was so good), and then the ending...would have had to highlight it all to do it justice...fabulous craftsmanship

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

4 posted 2008-11-04 05:00 AM

Enjoying the Ren Faire? *s

Very serene, M....very nice.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2008-11-04 07:43 AM

Just trying to ease into the winter Chanson, the faire is over and I am able to "just be" at home. Trying to re-organize my life, finally

.

So nice to see you here...don't be a stranger!

Thank you, Bobby, Steven and Bill ( a duet for sure).
Always a pleasure to read the responses.

M

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

6 posted 2008-11-04 12:59 PM

a most interesting 'write'!

I am especially fond of the image of clouds and thoughts

"seam(ed)...into quilts
of remembrances"

serious applause!

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

7 posted 2008-11-04 01:20 PM

Beauiful words of daydream and wishes, near put me into a trance where I was so relaxed. Well done my friend, enjoyed.

Rick

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

8 posted 2008-11-04 08:18 PM

Very beautiful, Maureen!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

9 posted 2008-11-05 04:38 AM

a most stunning write lovely Maureen... wonderfully expressed... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

10 posted 2008-11-06 01:10 AM

Maureen,

This is beautiful.

Alison

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2008-11-06 06:20 AM

Thanks again to all who responded. I am finally beginning to get past all the "past" that has held me down...and am accepting that which shall be (if you can understand that) thus giving me some peace for a change.

M

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

12 posted 2008-11-06 07:18 AM

I love this very much, dear Maureen. Profound and uplifting.

Love,
Margherita

StarrGazer
Senior Member

since 2000-03-05

Posts 679
Texas

13 posted 2008-11-06 08:02 AM

I love this also, it just seems to drift so seamlessly together and the result is nothing but memorable.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

14 posted 2008-11-06 03:59 PM

"Seduced by the calmness
of a life translated in understanding,
able to let go of the swords
of another time"

Teach me how?

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

15 posted 2008-11-07 06:09 PM

Very nice Maureen....Smooth and dreamy sort of work....Good show!

Eric

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

16 posted 2008-11-07 07:58 PM

Sooth and Dreamy indeed!

ARCTIC WIND

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