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Into Tomorrow's When
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Into Tomorrow's When |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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The clouds are lifting as I watch the weightless wisps shape my thoughts into the quiet of your mind. I seam them into quilts of remembrances, tieing the mysts into illusions of tomorrow's when... Seduced by the calmness of a life translated in understanding, able to let go of the swords of another time. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear M, This is a very smooth write. Love Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - always did like your writings, this one is one of them. We must do a duet... BC |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I was going to highlight and comment on the first stanza, then I read the second (and it was so good), and then the ending...would have had to highlight it all to do it justice...fabulous craftsmanship |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Enjoying the Ren Faire? *s Very serene, M....very nice. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Just trying to ease into the winter Chanson, the faire is over and I am able to "just be" at home. Trying to re-organize my life, finally  .So nice to see you here...don't be a stranger! Thank you, Bobby, Steven and Bill ( a duet for sure). Always a pleasure to read the responses. M |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most interesting 'write'! I am especially fond of the image of clouds and thoughts "seam(ed)...into quilts of remembrances" serious applause! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Beauiful words of daydream and wishes, near put me into a trance where I was so relaxed. Well done my friend, enjoyed. Rick |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Very beautiful, Maureen! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
a most stunning write lovely Maureen... wonderfully expressed... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Maureen, This is beautiful. Alison |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks again to all who responded. I am finally beginning to get past all the "past" that has held me down...and am accepting that which shall be (if you can understand that) thus giving me some peace for a change. M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love this very much, dear Maureen. Profound and uplifting. Love, Margherita  |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
I love this also, it just seems to drift so seamlessly together and the result is nothing but memorable. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Seduced by the calmness of a life translated in understanding, able to let go of the swords of another time" Teach me how? "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice Maureen....Smooth and dreamy sort of work....Good show! Eric |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Sooth and Dreamy indeed!  ARCTIC WIND |
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