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Open Poetry #43

Distinct Atmosphere

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-11-02 09:16 PM

Distinct Atmosphere

Standing in a bamboo
forest things seemed
different in my day.

Within the serenity
of the forest a peace
came upon me
and my cares
faded away.

The wind
so gently
caressing
the trees.
The ambience
so sweet in
embrace of me.

JamesLee
02November
2008

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (11-04-2008 06:19 PM).]

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2008-11-02 09:31 PM

wow...this captures a place as exotic as the mind can conjure up...its simplicity adds levels to its complexity

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2008-11-02 09:31 PM

This is what I love about your poetry.

xoxoxo
Alison

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2008-11-03 11:07 AM

efficiency touch its goal, thank you for sharing lovely words.

yann

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2008-11-03 03:10 PM

Very nice.
Ida

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2008-11-03 04:38 PM

JamesMichael - I can identify with the place in this write. Nicely done...

BC

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2008-11-05 04:48 AM

beautifully expressed my dear friend James

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2008-11-05 12:08 PM

nice

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