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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. You’re simply Not scary Enough Learn hard words Put on A dangerous visage In your eyes You As you are Will draw Every tragedy On campus as if They were forest flies You have a right To happiness— Regardless of All their tears Fight for what Has been Always yours Even then My friend For all Your decent Distancing You may not Survive . |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"Fight for what Has been Always yours" truly, a ponderable phrase |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
this is very touching, I know some Daves around me... thanks yann |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Good stuff, nice Write!  ARCTIC WIND |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Excellent advice to all the Daves in the world. Your ending, though possibly somewhat cynical, is realistic and serves as a warning that could even be preventative. - Owl |
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