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The third flight
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The third flight |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india 
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The flight of the phoenix Part 3- they Kill (Still they slay with the swords of races, casts or colors.) ------------------------- A blue flower, wild born hovers over the petite face of her. A muddy creek remains unstirred still-life besides them. Quite painting. She may wake up any time now and walk away in her nice rhythm. Except she has to cross the bridge. The bridge of death and life. Heaven! She knows how much difficult it can be to cross a bridge, a hedge, a boundary, a border or some virtual limit men draw, cairns of race, cast or colors. The other body is of her love, the one who had been clutching the air, trying to call her before senses gave away. Hung. The sky is wistful. It does not belong to earth or the men would have separated it in segments and flagged with colors, races, casts… © 2008 - All Rights Reserved Kushal Poddar |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
The "limits" set by many always baffles me for they have no rational or orderly relationship to human life. Powerful write. Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Dear Kushal, this is so deeply thought provoking. Ah those human interventions upon freedom, how they interfere so heavily with a serene life. Great poetic performance! Love, Margherita |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Ku, why don't you add the 2° part here in this post, by editing it?  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Kushal, this displays yet again, your gift of being able to infuse philosophical and political and sociological comment with great beauty and power. Wonderful and very effective! I admire and enjoy your heart and your mind very much. - Owl |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"The sky is wistful. It does not belong to earth or the men would have separated it in segments and flagged with colors, races, casts…" ~ The depth of your thoughts and your writing skills are highly admirable! You have a brilliant mind ~ and pen!  Linda |
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